[Cereal_Killa]

Bent:

Straight up..

“My syllables meddle and twist, with muscles that wrestle with fish,
And sever thorned-ribs from flesh bespeckled in grit…”

^ this ish is the rhyme structure I always put in every verse.. one bar just for my own enjoyment.. so def loved this line my friend especially with the crazy word play and transitions from steel to flesh to sealife.. dope

Hey man this is cool, I aint gonna play this is a key style.. dope still cause the rhythm is off the hook as well as vocab.. The overlaying metaphor of your verse’s being a big fish story, was sick.. The ever growing verse.. So yeh it was cool, not cram packed with emotion or detail but sweet none the less..

Keithy:

Dude, you was rushed this week.. but your point is direct, you weren’t fucking around.. I mean right now this is a hot topic, tip of tongues type shit so it was bound to be written about.. I think to me what makes this great is your voice.. its punchy, it hit hards and I can hear the anomisty in your words when I read them.. so to me you came at this with power.. a lot of power..

Vote = king keith

It’s tough cause bent easily out wrote keith with his structure, word usage and his overall metaphor.. But without a doubt keithy showed more passion in his verse when bents verse was solely about his passion for writing/fishing.. so keith unbelievably strong stance on the topic is what swayed me on this one.. Dope match up guys, you 2 rock