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Old 07-24-2015, 10:23 AM   #20
Pinot Grij
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Spaz..

I'm better bitch. You barely beat Iamrhetoric, when my comp's higher.
So you can try hard to Come Bust, but them lines won't ever be considered fire.

decent flip.. rhyme is way off though

I'm hood clown. I got the top down and the heater pop in slow mo.
Doin this so long I'll hit u wit clear shots at full speed.. nd I ain't got a Go Pro.

decent concept, but the diss feels indirect. More of a jab.

You trash now. I'll put em in the ground w/played lines it's 2 easy...
...And if i gouge the competition it's just to prove this fuck boy can't see me.

Decent.

Try to get at me. I got that chopper cocked back B wit mad patience.
I'll have that banger go thru more Shells than truck drivers at gas stations.

not the most original flip

Ur girl mad. She only sad cause you a little small nd you suck at poon.
So it's obvious that Bust premature.. we just wish you died that way too.

lmao @ suck at poon. Again, a pretty straightforward flip.

Bust

U handle L's like a Bitch, quietly sign out but inside there's violent screamin
So after losses we don't expect u to raise hell... We anticipate the Silent Treatment

pretty straightforward

Then u come back, win a no show then get beat spittin ur phony stuff
But quit blamin it on being lazy, I... Just cos u keep gettin urs swollen shut

doesn't really connect.. lazy eye lines are a little played too

Damn dog how's it feel to know if everyone showed u'd be like 1-6,
Or more like 0-7 cos honestly tic woulda bodied u if he actually Showed- He wanted it

liked the set up.. but not feelin the end result

So why r WE battling? Fuck comparin records I don't think me n this herbs meant ta meet
See faggot u should be slugging it out wit artificial... For the FUCKIN worst in the league

I think ribbit holds that crown, lol

N that yap bout smashin hoes is a massive joke, u aint never put ya Tongue on a whore, tho
S'why to spaz this a Cole world, cos pussy? He ain't neva done that before, no

aight

I feel Spaz came with some more creativity than Bust - who had good setups and concepts but the lines were just a little too straightforward for me.

Vote -- iSpaz
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