Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
this could've been nice worded differently. What does 'hand u with a charge' mean? I get what u was going for but the wordings just awkward
He ain't gangster can't even crip walk cus his legs are made of lard
if he waving straps in the air it's only when this fat fuck trys on his favourite bra's
ehh
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
I liked this concept more when I used it against u lol
Sorry bro but ur verse was full of played concepts n bad wording. U almost there tho keep at it.
They'll say LS Diesel, Until LSD 's'll have his day end w/ the saddest news,
He'll expirence trips so deadly, Travel agents around the world is gettin bad reviews.
this was aite. Good wording but 'experience trips so deadly' isn't really doing it for me. Could've been flipped better imo
U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
aite this is a played wordplay and u used it to dies his tagbpartner so that's a double fail in my book. Other than that it was a good flip on a played np
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
this was ok
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound
I like the wp but thought the execution could've worded better.
Overall I'm kinda disappointed in this battle cause i like both of yalls styles but there was some bad wording in this battle. Unfuk had the fresher concepts and better execution tho.
V. Unfuk
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