working that pole was meannnn
reflective style was ok
light up head was meannnn
pipe up was ok
hammer was basic IMO but good concept/pic reference I guess
tongue click could have been dope but didn't like your tie in. what does grabbing him have to do with his tongue clickin? (my african language bar in LLL was better tho lol)
vs
jelly had potential fell flat for me
cuban same as above - lazy ineffective execution
didn't like blowin him out the water
ignoring could have been delivered a lot better. had potential
paints too tight was funny tho hahaha - nice
50 shades of gray was meannnn
damn
remy ya verse was very stale bro but your last 2 bars were hot. should have wrote more like that man. what I mean by stale is, you had some decent concepts but your route of execution/delivery on them was weak, wack and/or lazy man. Your last 2 bars were dope imo but not enough.
orc got it on consistency
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