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Old 07-23-2015, 02:04 PM   #9
Bust
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Iam

Opener had a lot of potential, just fell flat at the end
String of words was an almost
French tips was ehh
Madden games was ooook, played concept tho
Mean with words verbal abuse is played also
I've seen hot dog before to but I feel like u referenced it cool.. Different twist made it ok
Didn't like the closer to much either


Dre

Opener was ehh
Mexican employment is pretty darn played
Stuck up coulda been doper, minus the simile,
Gow's cousin was ooook
Dead dogs named spots.. Lol ur funny man, wasn't that bad tho
Lay bust down was pretty good
Closer was ok,

Iunno this was a soft battle, lotta played not much fresh twists to um.. Iam just gotta take different angles man cos u got some cool concepts n honestly imo if u use similes make um dope af or it takes impact away.. Dre wasn't digging this verse that much either but u structured ure shit better n landed a couple more than Iam therefore I got u edging this...


Dre
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