Only shit you pop is miller lite, any slugs you throw you missin,
The gun spark no ignition, you aint got cans like the prohibition
----I wanna like this but I don't really associate cans with prohibition. It was a nice try tho
Your girl my bitch, you know i keep her stationed
I say the right string of words n she do what i tell her to like a sleeper agent
----this could've been nice but didn't like the wording.
Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen
----fuckn deeeeaaad. This was roflzzz. Wasn't feeling ketchup in the setup tho. Concepts is super played but idc this was dope.
Only beef I got with this verse is ur misses were bad. Either super played or bland.
Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.
----OK
That's really the only quotable u had. Like ur whole verse was full of almost quotables but they were almost all played concepts. Even the gow reference was built around a played concept.
But I still gotta vote for dre because of consistency... He only had one bad miss whereas rhetoric had a few. And as dope as hotdog line was it too was built around a played concept. That shit was still lulz and lotb tho. If rhetoric would've had one or two more good jabs he would've had it.
V. Dre
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