[El Muffin]

Only shit you pop is miller lite, any slugs you throw you missin,
The gun spark no ignition, you aint got cans like the prohibition
(concept had potential but the u aint got cans shit kinda weak. just saying he doesn't have guns. never seen the prohibition angle but when I think prohibition I don't think cans first. I think speakeasys n what they drink there tbh. its ok tho)

Your girl my bitch, you know i keep her stationed
I say the right string of words n she do what i tell her to like a sleeper agent
(hmm almost same as above. cool concept ok hit)

I got the gun plug in France, 30 goons on my facebook friendslist,
So it aint nothin to run up on his bitch and give her the french tips,
(this one I didn't like at all)

cats on NC clowned you, wassup with that faggot name?
If I aint got the magnum aimed then you gettin hit with the truck, no Madden game
(truck/madden done to death but the flow was decent. ok)

Spittin dragon flames, i'm brutal w/ every verb that i use
kid you couldn't be mean with your words if you caught a charge for verbal abuse
(this is older than rakim here tho)

Prepare the team, Faggot u can't ketchup when i pair the beams,
Only a time a chik say "u hot dog" is when you're dressed up as one outside the local dairy queen
(ketchup setup nono but lol @ the visual. like this)

you're a fairy fiend, you know i'm mean with the chopper,
so the aftermath of me and him? wont be the last time Dre needs a doctor
(kinda easy association. w/ the dr dre..the tie ins were well written tho. this ok too)



Today he’ll learn quickly, this kid stay getting burned w/ the spits,
listen; before you trip, get that hoe of a mother to sign the permission slip.
(no just rhymed awkward n kinda eh in inception)
This young faggot annoyin so I’m EASILY checkin him this moment,
Believe me; when I roll up you’ll get this work… NO Mexican Employment.
(lol this concept played but whole line worked. I can dig it)
Why act gangsta, I seen ya’ picture, this ugly fat kid must be jokin,
This nerds known for being stuck up… Like every chick that he approaches.
(ok u shoulda worked a he gets stabbed ref in there but its ok)
He’s garbo w/ it, look his record, seems EVERYONE pealed his wig,
Everythin you drops, minor kid, even GOW’S cousin wouldn’t feel the shit.
(ok)
You’ll never get as real as this, I’m on a whole new level of text, it’s scary,
Fact is; ya’ verses have so many dead spots – it could rival a pet cemetery.
(oh come on man this was pretty bad lol)
You’re a joke, so when you gonna learn that ya FLOWS ARE TRASH!
Ironic; Failed to lay Bust down…
But every week your treated like one – SMOKED & Passed.
(ungh this was dirty)
Plus ya’ HOE is wack, I’m honestly tired of doggin it, AND DUDE…
Ambush’n her mouth so often, next time ya’ kiss, your flossin w/ my pubes.
(lol cool)

mm kway weird battle

both had some good shit and some really bad shit

rhetoric pulled out the stick my dick in ur ear and fuck what u heard type line when the mean line he had

dre had dead spots like all dogs go to heaven which was on some he, be , g, bz shit

bust down was dirty tho. his last 4 were strong

rhet had a lot of ok lines. hotdog was funny but I think amen took it

v/amen