[Yppih]

Lotto

Bar1-Thought it was cool, couldve hit harder. 2.5/5
Bar2-Cool again. 2.5/5
Bar3-Yeah wording hurt this and not the greatest execution. 1.5/5
Bar4-Wording again was horrid, barely understood what you were trying to say. Wording really messed this bar up for me. 1.5/5
Bar5-Ehhh could've been better. 2/5

Overall-10/25

You started solid and lost steam towards the end.

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Remy

Bar1-I liked it. 3/5
Bar2-W/p was sound. Cool concept. 3/5
Bar3-Cool. 2.5/5
Bar4-Cool. 2.5/5
Bar5-Haha 3/5

Overall-14/25

You were definitely more consistent, first time reading from you. You had fresh concepts though.

v/Remy - He was the attacking force and outmatched his opponents