Objective, you took advantage of the wording in the topic. Good use of homophones to keep the writing interesting and absolutely destroy the topic with a great concept. Italicized part was the top highlight. Perhaps the other section would have been as strong as this section if you had also used more homophones in them as well. Especially enjoyed wordplay for GOATS (greatest of all time) to actual goat animals, it had a good follow up as well.
Innovator, the main issue is the character is too ambiguous. When not giving a name or any defining characteristics and going to use the words he/his/him the character needs to be noticeable through their actions or thoughts (perhaps they need to be more unique/character defining). We learn your character is a killer, but beyond that there is not much else, for an example of how the nameless killer works perhaps you are familiar with Clint Eastwood Westerns? Perhaps your story needed deeper character development to be stronger. Voted for Objective.
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