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Enigma, interesting treatise on the value of plan making and goal setting. The final line concluded everything nicely. Had a logical flow of ideas throughout, although it was largely example-giving or symbolic writing. Don't know how I feel about the popular culture references, perhaps they work as examples but also did not seem fitting with the beginning.

Mike Wrecka, very enjoyable to read. It was great how you wrote from perspective of the dinosaur. Some lines were also humorous (E.g., my arms were too short) which is an undervalued skill, because humor can be difficult to communicated let alone with only writing. Overall, Enigma had gave a grander scheme in relation to the topic, but Mike Wrecka had a better self-contained message and more interesting take on the topic.
Voted for mike Wrecka.