[ZeeDee]

Vulgar, very strong in narrative diction, flow and the details of what seems to be a letter to. Close friend from the format... the details seem more general and doesn't really expand on the topic of a timeless friendship.... but in some ways it does and I did like reading it as well.... very nicely executed and very broad with your display of comparison examples.... I would say this is more along the topic of the decay of society or evolution, but it does do enough on this topic too... there are a lot of lines that are worded nicely and caught my attention... you went through awie variations of examples of showing the weaknesses within the capitalistic systems of government we live in and did more to make t amusing with light hearted punchlines of reality in this system can even contradict iself just by living within it.. that was pretty cool...

Topical, I like you detailed format, flow through me off a lil bit, but the narration was so great, that was easily overlookd. Nicely narrated and the progression of the timelines in the details were drawn with good imagery to clearlysee the conditions you're describing. I don't see anything in this that draws a connection to the topic of a timeless bond with someone you don't see often, which is how I translate the quote. It seems like you're stating that China and Kampuchea have that relationship, but none of your details explain that connection, just show maybe similar mindframes between vicious countries in Asia.... not tryna sound like an arrogant and over opinated reader, but I think this would of been better to do with countries that you can express a clear bond through... like the US and the UK, which is historically interesting to this day... or lybia and syria... terrorism might be an old topic though.... even this example woulf of been better if you put some clear bond or connection between the countries other than similar styles of vicious rulers. I did enjoy this very much regardless and your research on this seems to be done good as well...

Vote Vulgvar... seems to fit the topic more... hardest decision I've had all week...