IambenT, it was very abstract, kind of reminded of that Zang Tumb Tumb poem. It seems like the complete opposite of the topic which is great, but I also misunderstood approx 75% of it. E.g., did not understand why certain phrases were given emphasis on bold. But rhyming and all that is excellent.
KingKieth, it was the simple, using concise and everyday language, feel like you purposely used less vocabulary to fit the topic. Excellent writing to get your message across, and use of the asides (E.g., the parentheses bits) to further explain the overly-simple concepts was great. This verse had a condescending tone like you were trying to explain something very simple to someone very stupid. Enjoyed it a lot. Voted for King Keith.
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