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Old 07-22-2015, 05:35 AM   #14
Grandiloquent
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Sharp has a rep beyond repute. So when he posts people should be rolling on the ground.
But I'm knocking him out cold so that like a baby he's rocking back aand forth.

Didn't even rhyme, if it was a great punch line it would be ok but this wasn't.

And everyone knows sharp for posting magz with Allen.
So everyone knows y'all kept the talent abstract and stashed in cabins.

This went over my head not sure what you were going for here

It's simple mathematics. Half your lines are like forty percent of my ammo.
And they say ya boredom offended me. So I'm blending in like noreaga dressed in timbos.

Didn't rhyme again.... It's rap....

I'm pushing ya off the cliff even if Richard is sorry of the boring offensive shit.
But no worry its all just to piss you off and to put you in a reclusive fit.

Hmmm probs best so far but no concept

You'll end up in a ditch for persisting to use weak concepts. Even if I was prepared to crunch a piece of your verse
I couldn't leave them with words. The heat is hidden deep inside pearls.

If there is a concept here it's weak, which is ironic considering your set up

But yo you a lazy hoe for thinking I'd lose. Better bring ya ability to the forefront
When my radio play going through the roof. I got so many listeners that I'm arctic like the south pole.

More a swag and flow thing with poor flow

Oh and I like the idea of handing trophies to all participants.
but that's a fatter novelty than plastic surgeons working on Kim kardashian.

This was your best so far but it didn't rhyme

so I'm flowing on the mic since its late and I've been drinking wine.
but even karaoke shout out thread couldn't account for the lack of skill ya lines bring to life.

Didn't rhyme... Do you have a thick accent or something? Anyways this or the kardashian was your closest to something half good



Sharps verse took this with ease though his Dracula line was cheesy as fuck lol, still, it got a grin from me. Rib you need to rhyme at the very least or make your punches amazing
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