[Mr. J]

Frequency lost, the cost of life in the microphone of the dispatcher.
But there is none. Sre the light from home. Suffering from risk factors
Eyes engulfed, edging towards an ecstatic end to your existence,
But that's not enough, more dreams shattered and you're forced to listen.

This opener was smoooooth, seems like you've improved a lot more
yet, you should have fleshed out the piece a bit more and involved everyone
it would have made a interesting verse had you added a bit more to it
I felt like you did a great job compared to how you used to do, that opener though
I really enjoyed how you did the dispatcher/risk factor line, that was nice
nice job

Know they not the price of their freedom, paid for in blood with only strife there to greet 'em
but held they committed, to principles and actions, their nimble interactions to rebuild their splintered faction
rekindled in the ashes from the fists of bitter faschists.

I really don't like that "know they not.." ordeal, that kind of put me off
but I feel like your verse came more according to your verse and flowed decently well
timeless came with a more exploration type of verse and yours felt...idk
it felt like you were trying to overcompensate your ideas and mesh them together
if that makes sense...regardless I feel you had a more ideal verse suiting your picture

v/Ullr, I felt like he came with a verse that had a slight edge over Timeless' piece
otherwise I felt like both of you were evenly matched and Timeless could have swept this away had he focused more
other than that...cool battle yo