[Mr. J]

This is a tough one to judge due to both verses being from different spectrum's
I really don't want to get too deep into this because I felt both have their flaws
when I started with Ribbit's verse it seemed to start well but once you threw your name in...
to tell the truth I lost interest, but I powered through to see if you'd come up with anything to really catch my eye..
unfortunately that was not the case here...

as for Tyson I felt like he really tried to mold a little something together in his short amount of time
and though it rhymed I didn't really pull anything from his verse either, the college/high school thing is cool and all
but I would have preferred to read a more fleshed out story..

and this is my issue, although both writers did what they could I felt only one of you may pass this first battle with a W

therefore I'm going to have to give it to Ribbit, although his verse had flaws he had the better attempt at working the topic to his advantage
Tyson's verse felt bland to me for the most part, although it had a more fluid use of rhyme it didn't feel like he took advantage of making a story to read
so...this goes to Ribbit