So this was a dope battle.
Timeless
Simply put. Nicely done. You had something going here. Could of won this
Easily imho. Ran out of time? Lazyness? What ever it is it bit you this week.
Could of used more to work with.
Ullr
Great use of the picture for a base to your story. Nicely done
Aswell. Unlike timeless i feel like your verse is a bit more complete.
It gave more and i was able to distinguish a beginning middle and end.
All which read very smoothly.
Overall
Ullr got this with a more complete effort i think. Both showed up and dropped
Some heat. Feel like both held back. Good battle either way.
Ullr
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