[Yppih]

Ispaz.

Bar1-Cool thought it was a cool opener 2.5/5
Bar2-I liked it, havent heard a Go Pro line, which is weird. 3/5
Bar3-Basic as far as the w/p goes. Punch was ehhhh. 2/5
Bar4-I thought it was again a good concept, which weirdly I've only heard 3 other times, but not this type of flip. 3/5
Bar5-Ehhhhh. I get the wit you were going with, wasn't my type. 2/5

Overall-12.5/25

I liked some of your shit, I thought it was cool m8.

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Bust

Bar1-Thought execution could've been better. It was an ehh for me 2/5
Bar2-Solid concept. 3/5
Bar3-Personal could've been executed better, the line fell apart, was expecting a haymaker. 1/5
Bar4-Cool 2.5/5
Bar5-Eh, I get it wasn't the smoothest execution again. 2/5

Overall-10.5/25

Overall-I felt if you would've executed your Tic personal and ended the closer better, you could've took the battle. I think there certain areas where your a bit too wordy mate. Need to cut down on the extra talk and filler and just start hitting, other then that you were solid.

v/Spaz-I felt he was a bit more creative and connected his concepts a bit cleaner then his counterpart Bust