Gotham, belt/needle n instagram app were all fire. Wasn't feeling the opener cause its a played Np, I liked the doc concept but thought it should've been doc lookin for more missing pieces. Closer was an OK personal but played concept.
That brown recluse line could've been OK but why is he eating tissue? I mean yea ya setup said he a wierdo but still that's just a little too much for me. The opener I wasn't feeling cause I had to Google the name and that takes something out of it for me. Eagle to fruit was an OK flip but its getting done to death these past cpl weeks. Think on ya feet played. Stroke of genius was OK. 44 was OK, decent way of saying he gonna lose to u.
Sho had the better verse IMO. Those 3 lines were enough IMO.
V. Sho
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