[Just Write]

Yes, I intended that you'd read this.. Wait

These demon creatures team as mates
Creators scheme to break us
Plan to place us beasts in cages
Then our dreamscape changes
Can't e-scape each others gazes hey?
At first it feels so great
But then it causes grief and takes off
Hung unseen beneath the shade
If we went to reach this day,
I know we won't, which seems okay
But to go and see, to know completely
Don't it seem so great? Would this stoic ego break?

this whole beggining was hmm... interesting and i read that first little mind fuck line twice like wait, what? lol

Will the seeds of change grow or freeze in place?
Too cold for me to say, suppose the moment leaped away...
Mold off green, decay and fade into diseased mistakes
But will the gold retreat to grey?
Will the cold impeach the rays?
I hold the key to free the slave
But do I leave this cage or re-chain Django and plead my case?

ok now were getting to the meat, laughed at you mentioning django tho

Do I believe in fate? Maybe she's my lady
Baby, I need you.. What, no, we agreed to break up
Said our feelings changed, that's strange though
I remained faithful in case we were to be complete again

yea, been there

Since lately I'm thinking it would feel so great to see your face
Embrace you, quiet your fears and wipe your tears away
But face it, we're weird again and each have careers to chase
So here's to dreary days awake and trapped in the passed re-enacted
Can't just grab the nearest plane or path to craft my advancement

yea this last part was solid

Can't just take a gal and fly away the way Aladdin did Jasmine
We agreed to scrap it, won't tamper the plans
Since interacting in the past wouldn't actually happen
If planning to plan wasn't planned in advance hmm?
That's that, happy packing, with good there is bad
You can't, in person, gather your words when you have to
Then in text you go berserk, end up burstin and spazzin
Talkin personal matters you don't dare blurt when we're gathered
And if I don't reply the words you imagine, the worst of infractions

lol totally agree, sometimes i cant believe the stuff ill share with complete strangers on here but couldnt tell some of my closest friends in person

Immersed in more drama than rehearsals for acting
Thoughts to flourish, abandoned, nah survive by a thread
Alive but the purpose is shattered, a worthless cadaver
No time to waste in days you aren't sure are your last
Maybe work our way past with encouraging laughter
We strayed away from mundane, all I'm sure of is that...
I stepped inside the cage one way and emerged a new man
What I learned in the shackles was worth the entrapment
It's that plans don't have to be perfect to have them

this was a very chill laid back verse and i enjoyed it very much, thanks








a flash of white light ignites a horrible sound,
as a meteorite crashes, hard into the ground/
I fall down, from all the tremors im trembling,
look around, as black clouds are directly assembling/
this crowd wasn't expecting, such a turn of events,
we weren't prepared, this just doesn't make any sense/
as the many fragments, disperse into the air,
every living creature on this planet, is visibly scared/
instantly aware, that things are about to get drastic,
im angry because I literally put all my eggs in one basket/

everything ive read from you just seems effortless and i comend that, its hard for me sometimes to get what i want to say across without it being hard to follow

no one stands a chance, under this circumstance,
some stare in a trance, while others try to advance/
but I physically cant, so im seeking support,
try to reach out for help, but it seems that my arms are too short/

i was gunna ask if you were a mdget or something before i read this whole thing haha

my vision distorts, I contort feeling weak and defenseless,
getting trampled by those, I would normally eat for breakfast/
a wall of fire is approaching and the heats tremendous,
Ive always been a loner, but now I seek acceptance/

i really liked these last two lines right here.. the loner seeking acceptence was nice

some funnel into tunnels that are completely endless,
while others take to the air , extremely reckless/
but im alone in the chaos, my resolve withers,
no plan for this, our species should have evolved quicker/
I figure that the galaxy lacks respect,
or why would they want to destroy me, a tyrannosaurus rex/
but hey if you gotta go, we all goin out with style,
except as im consumed by the flames, I see a mammal smile /

yea i definitely liked the surprise ending, i didn't see it coming.


overall i really enjoyed this battle and this is a tough decision for me, maybe the toughest this week. i like both pieces for different reasons, I think nigma came with a more thought provoking verse while MW's story telling skills were just superb but in the end there can only be one and the verse I enjoyed more (not by much though) was nigma so he gets my vote. great job guys