[ZeeDee]

Iambent, superb flow and diction and I hate fishing so I wasn't even feeling the content really, but the detailing you did and your narrative structure were both impeccable. It all read smoothly and each sequence had a god transition from stanza to stanza... the comparison of fishing to writing and rappin was pretty smooth as well, but as I said I hate fishing.... I did like what you did with this though. A veteran slave to the pen.. cool... so am I... good stuff man.

King Keith... are you from RM? I think I remembr you.... anyway... this was a concept that has been done to death really. You did okay with it but it just seems like u wrote something quick without much effort... its like u didn't expect to win so u didn't bother trying to.... if you are who I think, I know ur way better than this display shows..

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