There were three haiku's here that were particularly resonant.
Destroyter had the bee one, which I found very astute in presentation and pertinent. As well, as having a comical sense of relief with the pun and all. The other two were okay, but didn't strike a chord.
Vulgar: Crunch like Destroyer's honey piece was among my favorites. In fact those two were my favories. Crunch and the usage of sound to end it was a strong tool and is a fine piece. The next piece I liked was Succubus. Though, not as strong as Crunch or Destroyer's honey, it neverthless secures the bout for me. The last piece I did not have much inclination toward.
Vote: Vulgar
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