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Old 04-25-2013, 10:01 AM   #10
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Gonna make this short sorry.

ZY-great vocab, strong angle on the topic, very descriptive and out sideof the box. Some of it bored me asit gott near the end but plenty of hot fire

RG- good god man this was for me a long and somewhat painful read. There is brilliance mixed with tedium, but y ok u do a pretty good job of weaving quotes with rhymes.but it was just toomuch and seemed to lose steam for me

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