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Old 07-17-2015, 01:00 PM   #9
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opener was cool - cut you to ribbons was wack tho, would have liked it if it was something like;

"s'like a dept store grand openin, we set up shop & cut your ribbon deep"

idk something to that affect, tho would made it more aggressive and harsher - feel me?

geyser was dece
bell ringing an old cliche but your flip was straight
lebron clap I seen done before but yours was clean
venus fly trap shit was weird to me - very wordy
didn't like vigil

vs

sb was ok but the execution was mild - could've been harsher w/ it imo
shock/hand shake was ok'ish
X's I didn't like much
lime light was mild - typically don't like bars that end in a question. to me it takes away from the punch
notify was mild
raising the roof was cool

you love your similes nigga lol but cool battle. I think I got muff here with a more aggressive approach and consistent as well.

muff got it
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