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Old 07-17-2015, 12:34 PM   #8
Pinot Grij
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Muff Verse

Quote:
When I unleash the tek itll make sure you reek of septic
my niggas Old n Faithful. My Geyser Spray When you Least Expect It
even though Geyser is off from the play - it's still a cool concept.

Quote:
the boy is able. 40 make you hold ya navel
all u hear is a CLAP an you go up in smoke like LeBron at the scorers table
My bitch a Venus Flytrap. The bitch rob u n the chick'll spray
You Touch a Hair on her Head and the Doors Close in On You Before you Can Get Away
You spit that Nanny Mcphee. Ima animal how I dismantle the Beat
This is not my Vigil. You will never hold a Candle to Me
all this was cool... Venbus Flytrap is slept on, nice concept - like a backhanded insult. Vigil line was cool too.

Murda sho verse:

Quote:
Get slapped man! Why use a weapon? I could move on a blink
Cause the back hand will give u X's like u too young to drink!
My heavy bars in this site nice they love it when I write...
How u aint known yet, but everything u've done in the Lime light?
Best lines for me.. the closer was cool too.

Overall, I just think the Muff verse had more impact.. LeBron was the LOTB for me and the concepts were more varied so it was more fun to read.

Vote -- the Muff verse
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