I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off
Cool 2.5/5
I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog
Ehhh, its not bad, I thought the execution could've been sharper 2/5
I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck
Yeah cool 2.5/5
Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind
Nah bruh 1/5
U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke
Best line so far 3/5
Overall - 11/25
Still a decent key, It seems you didnt put a whole lot of effort, but the verse was still a solid battle verse.
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you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing
No punch + the concept wasn't proper.... 1/5
way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses
Concept was ok actually, but was let down by the execution 1.5/5
ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping...
u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion
Ehh seem like an actual personal. Not like I know Aloe, execution was still lacking 2/5
openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor
Statement here not a punch mate. 1/5
Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations
Nah bro, wasnt feeling this 1/5
Overall - 6.5/25
Just felt a lot of your concepts came off forced. I think getting that creativity flowing will help.
Overall - Strikta, was the more opposing force here and he just held his own here pretty comfortably.
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