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Old 07-17-2015, 08:19 AM   #8
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Look, Outsider is another name for nerd and nerds don't spit fire
N tell ur girl stop tryna recruit me, it feels weird since I'm known to go Insider
N I already beat u once and I'd still beat u at the drop of a dime
after this battle u'll be sour with 2 L's under you, you're basically Lama the Lime
yea I was hot in my prime but don't act like my raps are forgotten
when ur style is basically a time hop to back when I was actually popping
this pussy signed out as champ. seen me, his dick got extra hard
I guess he figured this his only chance to get on the return of the legends card

these hit effectively.

wasn't feelin your WWF or WWE w/e the fuck it's called now and days wrestling references tho. they seemed off and corny to me but quoted bars were nice.

vs


You literally work with retards, I know for a fact that shit doesn't yield chips
You're lame, the only chicks that drool all over u are the ones u take on field trips
And you're a part time security guard with your shirt buttoned to your second chin
When girls say ur really frisky tonight, ur just making sure they dont sneak a weapon in
Trying to lose weight? just try crack cuz uve been saying feed me more way b4 Ryback
No one reps that dead crew, if u wanna be a Capo so bad Ill leave u like the one Chiraq


opener was wicked and a dope personal. think you could have done better on the never mentioned personal, that kind of fell flat for me. outsider play was mild, think I just read a similar concept in the discussions thread orc posted in the crew diss. plus it was kind of basic and simple, feel as if you could have done much better w/ that or should have had a harsher execution. offensive lineman almost got quoted but felt the same about it as the outsiders play but your setup helped it, not by much.

this battle definitely close and for being rusty and not writing in a while (at least on here) I thought metts showed up pretty strong. kind of died out and lost steam at the end but pretty consistent. his wrestling references IMO hurt his verse tho. Kar dropped nice as well, but wasn't feeling his mentioned play, outsider and tampa bay plays because felt his executions were to simple and basic and not harsh enough in which they could have potentially been wicked.

I got Lineman barely edging this
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