Aite ribbit, I think ur like a 12 yr old kid who's tryna get a grasp on this shit. Really sometimes with some of the shit u write its like u a 9 yr old lol. Real talk.
u had a couple punch lines in ur verse. I was pleasantly surprised. I think ur starting to figure out how to form a punch, u got the flow part down now concentrate on getting ur concepts and shit up bro.
Ur social lifes on support, someone pull the plug on this faggot..
nerd gets a + for charisma...when rollin stats in games of dungeons and dragons.
This was LOTB. Played concept but a dope lulzy flip. Good shit. I liked ur verse too it was pretty consistent, I think u only had one strait up miss. Good shit bro
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