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Old 07-16-2015, 10:18 AM   #6
Hush
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Originally Posted by ribbit View Post
Bitch please. U aint ready this week. And this not no beef
But you'll still end up giving ya moms grief and end up with false teeth
this is a ok rhyme but its not really a punchline. do u watch kotd dont flop or url? they would help u better understand what a effective diss sounds like.. this is what is basically called "filler"
Ya lines are weak punchlines that knock u off your feet.
This like the cool kids nagging on the geeks or floating upstream
same as above
Ya flows be redundant nah you a rat I'm gonna cook in my oven
I'd call you a player but ya mommas already spread herself wide open
ok, this sorta dont make sense to me dude, but it almost feels like u tried to punchline so cool
And fuck it if I gotta drop more when u ain't even gonna post til tomorrow
Since I can't rashinalize a better place for you to drop....out of the top floor
dope slant rhyme..this was a punchline too. try to do more of this bro
Its agonizing to say the least but your in my belly cuz I'm a beast
You more of an indoors kinda pussy ya cuz u too bitch to get released
lol ok cool
Oh snap less we forget my potency which got u struck all of a sudden.
Pussy please dont show since ull be seeing stars like a comet
nah,but now I see u know what a punchline is. dont do filler next week bro

@Infiltration
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Originally Posted by Infiltration View Post
Smh..


I'm vintage raw; with ur battle record kill urself & end it all
At this point...ya loss column NOT seein a 9 couldn't be saved by Benfords Law.
lol what? I aint goggling that
My layered shits too dimensional, ya content is crude n minimal
Wording & punches just land-flat together...that shows their two dimensional.
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Ya moneys short rib, while my cash so long its hard to measure
u old baroque ass nigga, im rich enough to own a palace w/ that architecture.
yeah that I know.. ok cool. I like that ur on some different shit
LGBT all on fb... N i support marriage even tho I'm type hetero
My gay awareness says there's more men between ribbons than pride festivals.
ok
Late night all black attire, we ride out and let them things pop..
We live by the motto "suns out, guns out"... Without the gay ass summer tank top.
ok cool. lol funny to see a boroque line, then a line about some science shit i never heard of, then a dope gun line.. but I cant hate I enjoy the variance
Ur social lifes on support, someone pull the plug on this faggot..
nerd gets a + for charisma...when rollin stats in games of dungeons and dragons.
lol funny dope
Inf got this
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