Netcees - View Single Post - IAmRhetoric 2-3 vs Bust 2-3 {Bust wins}

Useless · 07-16-2015, 10:00 AM

A few of rhetorics bars looked like they were going somewhere but then the execution was just not there. They were either really statementish or played and underwhelming. I wanna help u out n tell what u what to do but i really don't know. Concepts n wording I guess.

Bust had more lines I liked than didn't like. U went punch, filler, punch, filler, etc. And I ain't mad at u, u did plenty to win. The opener was a nice personal and lulz, that 'I am' line was pretty dope, that involved in a crime line was dope IMO, could be played but I haven't seen it, which is crazy cause its a pretty obvious concept, I got one similar to it myself this week. I wasnt really feeling the NFL line i thought could've been flipped better but it was OK. Anyway other than the obvi filler I enjoyed ur verse.

V. Busted

07-16-2015, 10:00 AM	#7
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	A few of rhetorics bars looked like they were going somewhere but then the execution was just not there. They were either really statementish or played and underwhelming. I wanna help u out n tell what u what to do but i really don't know. Concepts n wording I guess. Bust had more lines I liked than didn't like. U went punch, filler, punch, filler, etc. And I ain't mad at u, u did plenty to win. The opener was a nice personal and lulz, that 'I am' line was pretty dope, that involved in a crime line was dope IMO, could be played but I haven't seen it, which is crazy cause its a pretty obvious concept, I got one similar to it myself this week. I wasnt really feeling the NFL line i thought could've been flipped better but it was OK. Anyway other than the obvi filler I enjoyed ur verse. V. Busted Last edited by Useless; 07-16-2015 at 10:03 AM.