[Mr. J]

girls make him uncomfortable, he the type to tell a bitch
"it's not that I don't like you, unfortunately i'm just selabit"
that's kinda funny, but now i'm using ur internet search history to hurt you,
First the 9mil bang bust, then we roll up n start taking shots at his girl too,
^^^^
I really wanted to find more about your verse to enjoy
but the only lines I could really pull out of that were these...
I feel as though you need to work more on your execution
some lines seemed like they would go some where but it just came across rushed
you don't need to rush to get up a verse before your opponent...
you have several days, bulk up your concepts & peep a few battles & work your style in...
either way...decent drop...

said he had Barz fa Hush then got scarred n crushed, this punk was merciful
I mean this pussy said he had 16 Strictly for Him.. N not ONE was personal

I got a vicious can that'll shatter ya frame so don't cause this shit ta blam
Cos 1 shot'll leave pieces of I Am all over a wall like nas' biggest fan
His shits weak so we'll prolly hear quick key to cover up the fact all of its lame
NFL 101, no matter how often u attempt to rush, Weak Lines WONT get u positive gain
^^^
you were the stronger out of both of you in this battle
what leaned me was that 'I Am' Nas line, that was slick
the NFL line was pretty dope as well, the rest was ehhhh
your lines were more precise, but the filler could have killed you
luckily you snuck a few gems through and kept it moving

v/Bust, he was the stronger of both battlers today
as for IAm I felt that you could have came with a stronger verse
this came across rushed & didn't really help you in the end
other then that, I think you are on the right track...
cool battle guys...