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Old 04-24-2013, 08:31 PM   #4
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I thought this whole thing was pretty nice, I didn't like the
lethal placebos line, I don't know it just seemed funny to me...
and not a good funny, but the rest was quite interesting
the vocab and word placement was nice for the most part though
nice drop
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