I enjoyed all three. My least favorite would be "house on vaunted Hill" I most enjoyed the bee haiku. It had reality and depth tied into humor. I also enjoyed the surprise crunch as well as the concept behind the sun not rising, but maybe you're just not opening your eyes. All in all haikus can be a very challenging style of poem. Such a confined space to work with, while I must say you both far exceeded what I would expect, meaning I think all 6 are very well written with close attention to detail, I feel DEZ did a slightly better job in having 2 out of my favorite 3.
DEZ
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