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Old 07-14-2015, 06:03 PM   #6
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Pretty gosh darn impressive "range", compared to the other kinds of verses you make.
Kept up the quality rhyme&flow, but introduced a "mad-swag"/"over-the-top-language"- type of verse.
your sentence structure is noticeably good (again). pretty "graphic" content though. I mean, I will say anything, but did not expect quite the sexual "details"- even taking into account the title. (It's not a baaad thing to be unexpected though- just probably due to other verses of yours i've seen)
Thus, if you made it an audio, it'd probly not get any "play"in the clubs or any airwaves as a single, but you could bury it on the track-listing somewhere, as a "fun",brief,boastful,coarse,etc "piece" for any of your listeners.

a changeup, so to speak.

on second thought I might have to agree with BB to some extent tho
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