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Old 07-14-2015, 01:26 PM   #9
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Vulgar - Haiku nr.1 - Dope shit man, modern haiku to the fucking core with that surprising twist at the end etc. Nr.2 - Loved this one as well, thought the first was better in terms of ''typical'' haiku tho' but this was thought out as well. The last was pretty straight forward, cool for what it was but it ends there. Enjoyed the first 2 a lot more than your last.

Destroyer - Your first haiku was pretty atmospheric to the theme you were given, cool shit. Your second haiku was cool with the twist on the end, enjoyed it. Same goes for the final haiku with a rhyme in it as well. Cool shit.

Vote - Cool match up and both came around with some dope submissions. I think it's cool to see Destroyer adapt and actually come along with some cool shit. That said I enjoyed Vulgars first haiku a lot, same thing with Destroyers second. Didn't really care that much for both writers third haiku as opposed to their first 2.

Personally I enjoyed Vulgars first 2 a bit more than Destroyers first 2 so my vote naturally ends up in Vulgars favor. Ye, Vulgar gets my vote.
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