I was not feeling ribbit's verse at all. It seemed like you were trying way too hard to use way too many big words for whatever reason, and that's all that I got out of it. When someone does that it completely takes me out of the experience of reading a verse and makes it a chore instead of something that's interesting or enjoyable.
Vulgar came completely different. The language was plain and read like an opening to a chapter in a book instead of a poem. The last bit was excellent. There were a few spots were I thought you could cut out a word or two (like "noting down" to just "noting", but all in all it was solid. Nice work.
V/Vulgar
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