Vote vulgar.
Tbh i didnt like either. Vulgar was on the brinl of just losing me completely
But his piece picked up and I noticed the subtle things here and there that connectec
Hos words togther and inturn connected his words to the topic. Albeit loose connection
But it waz there. I feel like V goes off in his own head and just lets the pen go with
Out consequence. Double edged sword tbh.
Rbbit i feel like you dropped some very clever lines here and there i mean tbh you
Have couple pf gems scattered through out. But you had the same problem vulgar had.
I couldnt find a connection to the topic. At all. At times it felt like your lines didnt connect
To each other. So its a bit incoherent for me. For that reason i cant give you the vote. I dont know wtf u where talking about half the time.
"Manicles alight in city late burning.
Worse definitive hannibles."
^^^^
What?
Vote vulgar
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