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Old 07-12-2015, 04:09 PM   #16
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Art

Sorry brah, but I don't envy ur luck.
Hes always predicting disasters..I'm predicting his verse will never be anything but.

Ya text is horrible, that shits wordy n filled with niche n terribly weak jokes.
The way this arthritis cringe worthy, ya joints pain me with each and every keystroke.


Chyeah

when it comes to you and skills, I'm at a loss Art, you bout to take a loss, Art
cause I can have you laid out on the canvas or missing, either way, you lost Art

you's a discussion forum attention whore but we all know that you're fake
tryna hang with the big boys when you post reminds me of Muggsy Bogues in the paint
I battle for blood, but at any minute it can be shots fired, boi
I'm draped up like Bags living room, one wrong word and I'm outside yours
yah chances for a win are aweful slim, those odds should have you pretty annoyed
I'll go out on an artificial limb and say it's cause the voters and feeling yah joints


Art your wording isnt really bad like that but you gotta turn up the heat in ur punches bro, some of your shit was just bland. The ones you did get off shows ur potential to put together a good verse but u just gotta stay consistent with the hard hits. Chyeah u started off so fuckin corny and I was about to just stop reading ur verse but then u started heating up towards the end.. Just enough to edge u the win imo so vote Chyeah
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