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Old 07-12-2015, 12:50 AM   #8
Unfukwitable
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- Fight Night 7
- Battle Arena Tournament
- 1-2 Punch League

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When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit
Bro that's some true shit. U'll get spotted out if the shoe fits
Ya demise won't be just a set up, it'll come w/ official architect blue prints
Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/

I liked the opener concept felt it couldve been worded way doper tho, overall I liked ya verse I think u couldve scrapped the whole beast boy idea or tied in something else to make it stand out. but the blueprints line was niceee and the wording was crisp.

vs.

So since I signed out my consequence is having me scrape this fuckin dweeb?
Well no matter who u are N.R. ima make u take a vacation from this league
Don't care who u battle with those shitty old scripts...
Cause we all know those punches "gonna miss everybody" more than Busy Bone did
Im either gon flip or blow ur mind from this world...
Just know death is in Odd future so much it could collab with Tyler & Earl


felt like the one way & same sex bar was missing impact and couldve been better, but that Busy bone bar was fireeeeee! no doubt very creative and unseen and I fucked with the RnR bar too.


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Felt one just had the stronger quoteables... v/Sho'nem
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