bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
good concept, bad execution... 'such hidden dick' just doesn't hit right
when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with
yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it
stretched lines been done a lot. this twist wasn't bad to me, no pun intended
yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
solid
vs.
through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
smooth one
made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
not a great concept but not bad
i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
haha pretty good
Cool shit... Lotto had a couple nice concepts, farm / pig play was pretty solid.
A few of em coulda used some changes in wording though and didn't hit.
Fraze had shoot a Lot in the face which was prolly LOTB. Cheshire cat worked well.
Just a little more consistent overall not a huge margin though.
V/ Fraze
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