[Mr. J]

My starting five'll dot his eyes or carve his ass for the cash
U'll see his arms flail from the cut like he expected a bounce pass
When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit

Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/
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those were the stand outs to me, I felt like your verse was cool
after getting to the Megatron line I got thrown off...you going to ram a tank through his chest?
idk but I felt like you came pretty slick with these lines, that closer didn't feel fitting to me
maybe if you had that quan chi at the end that would have been better


Ur dame'd get scooped but I won't hit it again till she bust them keagles out
I've grown tired of her same sex, while u're just happy it's fuckin legal now
Someone get them a doctor... cause Bullet Farm's a fuckin clique of imposters
If the mag woulda ran out of bitches Sharp coulda just listed their roster

Come see some high tiers & get ripped up, or leave this guy seared
As something hot chips at u that'd give Strikta burrito ideas
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You had some dope concepts weaved into your verse...
my only issue was that Odd Future line, maybe I didn't get it because I haven't followed them lately
but that Bizzy Bone line was pretty lulz worthy, nice work regardless

V/Murda, I feel like he had a few more quotables compared to Odd Ways...
oh...now I get the Odd future line, durr, anyway this was a close battle in my eyes
buuuut now I feel Murda edged it out for me, Odd came with some pretty cool lines
the roses & megatron line just killed it for me though, either way nice battle