[Mr. J]

bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand

yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
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These lines were the stand out to me, it was a cool verse
but some lines I didn't really fuck with like the tic tac line
& the overstretched line..I felt like it would appeal more with a better flip
but for me it just kind of put me off, nice work though..


through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image…
pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’
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These were the stand outs for me, that 'good writtens' line snuck by me
I was like whaaaat...but i read it again afterwards and thought it worked
I actually thought that De La Soul reference was pretty cool tbh..
the make up line was pretty funny too...

v/Fraze, I got fraze with this one due to a higher approach on quoatables
Lotto came pretty good but that opener & stretch line kind of felt like a shot in the foot
either way this was a decent battle, I just felt that fraze came across smoother