I liked ur verse. Ur opener was forced as hell, apologizing ahead of time was funny but still...it was aite tho. U had good pic references I like the ginger line n the blueberry line. White to brown was aite...that Gilligan line tho. That was the standout, best line in ur verse but it could've been better with a harsher punch instead of just "like I'm watching Gilligan's island". Still dope tho. Special effects star was meh, wasn't feeling it. Closer was aite, I had to Google Ron Swanson tho n that always takes away from the punch for me. I know who he is once I seen his pic I just didn't know his name, should've went with someone more popular IMO like Burt Reynolds or tom selleck but that's just my opinion others may disagree. It was a good line tho.
Overall I thought u had a nice verse with consistency.
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