[uh-oh]

the differing mixing between verses saddens me. i didnt like geno's first stanza thing it was eminemish but then he went in. last dude could be cool but he needs alot of work. and by that i mean he needs to make like 542 more songs before he will be comfy enough to not have me hate him.

nah but for real you guys could be nice but honestly i dunno, you guys gotta produce these shits beyond sending eachother verses. if that makes sense. like have a cohesive way of attacking it beyond just like a topic and then writing and then spitting it

you gotta be able to tweak your verse and not be concerned about getting every syllable out how you wrote it.

like badweather off bat, i've become accustomed to your first verse so i don't think the dead dude thing sounds bad anymore. but now the down in every bottle cuz im stressin about tomorrow just comes off sloppy, whether its syllables or you rushed it or whatever, it needs rewritten or you need to do more takes

i'm only harsh-ish in my criticisms because you and geno both are at that plateau rappers i've encountered on the internet get to where they don't get better. they make a million tracks staying in the bad habits they formed.

basically just be a bigger critic on YOURSELF.

but hey

<3