Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr. J
Bet your top dollar this is murder, nah this accidental, let's blanket dawwwg
I had you backwards, & hit you with a 'cro'bar to turn you into J's son Todd
Cool.
my verses are acid flowers that grow wild, & suit the style I give
when he write verses. he think gold blooms I'm like nah "Thats one big pile of shit"
Ehh.
If dude calls me a bitch, I'll slap this pussy, I'm a boss. it's about to show fam
keep it drug related & put bread on his head & call him Powdered Toast Man
Eh.
the last battle I was in was Shadow boxing, "What's the risk?" he's asking
You dope? bring that list in, 'cause I'll play Ali this time around & just eclipse this faggot
I don't get this. Statementish.
this was on a whim, he's prolly doing research in a Batman tshirt gloating at home
I find it funny cause the irony shows..that I have another dead man ghosting my posts
Home/Posts doesn't rhyme. Otherwise this was nice.
if he beats the breaks off me, I'll just get gassed & take it to his own lane
maybe that explains the whole reason I got up in that ass like it was road rage
Ok concept but again, doesn't rhyme. Executed a bit mild.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Orc
hi Qwarterz
I'm the Last King of Freshness. I'll Blind u 4 being frail wen u see trouble
Ya Teeth'll make a Lasting Impression.. & u'll read Braille offa Each Knuckle
Nicely worded old concept.
J won't make a killer post here. YOOO -> Is Jim a dope peer?
U'll Get Cut when the Nasal Stick Out... & u need to trim that Nose Hair
Nah.
Fuck this Clowns smirking. Once the Louds working O's so Stellar
Doggg... You'll Catch A Body quickaa than Crowd Surfing at Coachella
This is ok.
U still hot & street? Nah, u gotta be offed, honestly. It's gotta be
1 cut'll leave him witha Permanent Smile that'd make his Laughing Gas obsolete
Not bad. be/lete is a bit of a stretch, but it sounds ok.
It's so so wack that u tryna come with ''oh no!'' No Holds Facts
& how you Been Stalked I find it reaaaal ironic that You Don't Know Jack
Lol I like it but bean/been don't sound the same.
This dork bitch is gonna die. && Orc IS the God of Lime
Shit. U can check ANY Jewelry Store & realise Quartz is a Common find
Nicely worded but meh.
Honey, I'm home.
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Orc got it. His bars were worded much harsher. Mr. J had some cool concepts but they weren't worded as effectively as they could've been.
EDIT: After re-reading my vote doesn't change, but that dead man line was pretty nice from Mr. J, despite the fact that it doesn't really rhyme. This battle was closer than expected, but Orc still gets it for me.
V/ Orc