Mr j
Opener was ooook
Thought dead man coulda been dope with a better setup..
Honestly I had dope concepts just sloppy wording.. If u tightened that shit up n didn't chop it sooo much sounds really nice.. First I read from u but looking forward to readin more
Orc, iunno I pretty much lije ur entire verse.. Some bars weren't that harsh or ur set ups coulda related better but damn to include that rhyme scheme like that made this a very enjoyable read.. Damn good shit bro..well structured verse with solid punches.. Nice shit..
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