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sral · 07-10-2015, 08:21 AM

Okay so I got Orc winning here, but goddamn that verse sucked ass compared to what he can/has brought. WTF?

Seriously only felt the 'lasting impression' line from him was anywhere near decent, the reast flopped harder than a Robranda titty imo.

J has a few good concepts and ideas, but the wording let him down and that spacing between bars crap needs to go. Not a good battle by any means, sorry bros, just calling it as I see it.

Orc very slightly edging this.

07-10-2015, 08:21 AM	#10
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	Okay so I got Orc winning here, but goddamn that verse sucked ass compared to what he can/has brought. WTF? Seriously only felt the 'lasting impression' line from him was anywhere near decent, the reast flopped harder than a Robranda titty imo. J has a few good concepts and ideas, but the wording let him down and that spacing between bars crap needs to go. Not a good battle by any means, sorry bros, just calling it as I see it. Orc very slightly edging this. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)