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Old 07-09-2015, 08:14 PM   #10
Pinot Grij
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Chyeah had a good flow and swagger to his verse - it was very readable. No line really stood out as a knockout punch but everything was consistently even...

Artificial - rhyming "piles" with "Pyle" gets no love from me... line was kinda ehh.. back to basics line was very played. The FB line was pretty funny, just imagining a guy imagining himself in some chick's pictures, lol. Raising stakes, again, just not a very elaborate concept.

Overall, I felt that Artificial had some groaners and Chyeah, although not overwhelming, didn't really do anything wrong. The verse felt like a solid verse, if that makes sense, and didn't really fall off at any point.

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