Since im here.
Hush
Noce touch tho. Very subtle with the poetic voice. Lol bro honestly
This little diddy was dope. For what you had it was chalked full of depth
And emotion. Only thing lacking was a bit more imagery which could of
Added to the piece as a whole if you would of just wrotea bit more. None the less
What you had was strong.
Des
You knoe poems nigga why u frontin like u dont know how to write poetry lol.
Bit nah this very well written and i gotta say i like this one alot more than lask
Weeks. I felt like this has closure. I loved how this rhymed by the way. It really
Added to the overall value of your words. Strategic rhyming and good imagery.
Like hush tho i wish u would wrote more.
Overall.
This was a good battle of two dudes dipping there toes in the pond. I wanna see you
Niggas bathed in this shit. Cuz ama be honest bothofvyou could write HOF poetry
If you really wantes to. On to the vote. Ok so i re red both and ana have to give my vote
To the piece that has more playback value. I think des got this one. As im typing the vote
In my head im hearing pieces of his poem. That is dope. No hate on hush either cuz this
Was actually really close. Props to both and hope to see u both later in the season
Vote des,
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