opener had potential, maddddddddddddd wordy tho bro. appreciate the creativity tho.
gold blooms was mild
bread on his head was mild needed harsher execution
didn't get the eclipse faggot reference?
dead man had potential - execution was mild tho
up in the as/road rage really isn't a connection - think you could have did better w/ that.
vs
lasting impression I've seen you flip before, this one was better
nasal stick out was ok
catch a body I didn't like too much
Laughin gas was cool
been stalked is an older wp/reference your flip was cool tho
quartz was ok but on the simple side
J need to execute his concepts a little harsher and he'll be straight.
orc got it
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