[Mr. J]

My response ability's my responsibility
Im high rapping. god in here with me and ive lost all civility
Though im Lost in the fog im still looking hard for the wishing tree
Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine.
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this was my favorite section off of your verse Greed, the flow was smooth
the line's came together with some slick precision, that opener made me think ehh...
but I read it again and it's pretty dope, the ending was alright, but the verse flowed smoothly

my niggas bubble, in the kitchen... stove workin them quantam physics
I'd get locked if I got specific but I promise my digits wasn't effected by that lotto ticket
king of the back an forth, and thats cuz when I'm involved no cash is lost
yea I was at my mommas house nigga..it runs in the fam.. I was droppin a package off
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that's pretty clean right there, I just enjoy the way you bounce around with the flow
the rest was on point too, I feel like you had the strongest verse here
that ending was pretty smooth as well, nice work man...

Im a Chiraq drilla, got my nigga doin time for murder. Facts
I kill 16's, he killed & got 16.. Bitch we still BOTH doin murder raps

We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole
I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat
Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat
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Your verse was as smooth as Hush's, but had it's hit & misses as well
my only issue was the 'not equal line' but I like the rhymes wrapped around it
it sounds good when you first read it because you don't catch it at first
but I never seen a square door aside from a doggy door, which I will give you
dope verse regardless



This was a dope collab, I really enjoy reading collabs because the styles need to mesh
this is more of a crew drop, so I understand you are all showcasing your skills
and all of you have your own dope way of attacking a verse & blending rhymes together
it's enjoyable to read. nice work fella's keep up the suicidal work